To have got a better mark on my mock exam and a good mark on my actual exam I need to learn some of the terminology of media to use in my work instead of replacing it with a word from me trying to explain (kind of like what I just did). To have improved my audience question I could wrote about, lighting, the mise en scene a bit more, mode of address, colour scheme etc. generally write more about things instead of skimming over them - identify & justify!!! For example, when writing about the colour scheme say how it as secondary meanings like being suave and classy.
Coursework wise I just need to put it on my blog I think(??) so I can improve on what is needed as I have time. Also, I need to revise more as I didn't revise over Christmas (my excuse was Christmas) so if I begin to plan out when I am going to study, along with my other subjects, it should help me get a much better grade in my actual exam.
